Evaluation on the construction of storyboard

Our first storyboard for the initial idea was ineffective, messy and illogical. We broke the story board up for different people to do different shots. However we soon realised that this was not sensible and all got very confusing. This was no longer a problem when our idea was criticised and we made adjustments because we would have to create a new storyboard. Learning from experience, two group members, Tom Cunningham and I talked through the storyboard and went through shot by shot together. Although this was a slow process it ensured that we had a clear, tidy new storyboard.
I am very happy with the storyboard in which Amy Milan and Tom Cunningham produced for our group. It is very neatly present with the essential information on it. It is clear to understand which is important because the documents are very important for the director on the day of the shoot. The director needs to be able to read these documents easily, so that everything runs smoothly for our group. The shots are logical and creative. Since we adjusted our idea, our shots are more original and our narrative is less clichéd.
The shots are realistic, practical and sensible as we are not going over the top. This gives us as a group the ability to use the simple shots to make a compelling, effective sequence for our target audience. Although the drawings aren’t brilliant, they are clear and good enough for us to understand and make sense of along with the writing. As a group and individually, I am happy with what we have achieved so far.