My Version

In my opinion our new version is very effective because it makes sense and fulfills all the aspects of a thriller. It is interesting because people being schizophrenic is a theme that is accurate and very scary because we don’t really know what it is. Another thing is the way our narrator behaves is very scary because his mind is ill and therefore we don’t know what he is going to do next. Another thing that makes this production good is that his wife doesn’t know that he has another life, but we do and therefore the audience is scared. It holds together because the narrative TOM has a reason for doing the things he does because his brothers face is deformed and therefore he can’t stand to see other people’s faces. I would sent this to Hollywood to Warner Bros. because they are a huge film company which produces very expensive productions and I think that this movie can be brilliant if Hollywood would spent money for it because you could have lots of “police work” in it as well and the use of CGI for deformed faces and even explosions of the cellar which would make this simple production a very high class thriller/horror production in the style of “Seven”. Hollywood is able to do those things and therefore I wouldn’t sent it to a British film company because this horror production should have elements of a thriller and therefore be financed and given the green light by Hollywood to make it a huge production.